June 12, 2016 by Stephen Bentley
These Can Help Your Self Editing
This post first appeared on my author website earlier today.
It’s a self editing day today.
I harboured a desire as a kid to become a journalist and then an editor on a newspaper. The old days of print, that is. An editor seemed to me to be a grand and important person. But I was a kid and everyone seemed important to me back then.
I am largely my own editor. I do edit my books and am in the process of editing Undercover: Operation Julie – The Inside Story right now. I needed to take a breather so I thought you may like to know something about how I edit.
Writing a book is the easy part. With me, once I start then the book flows – within reason. The secret at the early stage of writing is to get it down on paper. The niceties can wait for the later stages.
Editing is a different process. Once you are satisfied with the final draft of your manuscript that is the time to edit. You can opt to find a professional editor. That’s fine if you can afford to do that. The better ones do not come cheap. There are also different levels of editing. I don’t propose to detail them as I don’t use an editor.
No editor, but I do use a professional proofreader. It is easy to miss the little mistakes. The wrong punctuation or a spelling mistake. They can spoil even the best written books.
Writing is one form of communication. The reader should find a book easy to read and it needs to communicate a message clearly.
This is why editing is essential. No matter how good a natural writer you may be, your book still needs editing. The writing, the message, the clarity can always be improved.
Hemingway costs $9.99 to use on a PC or Mac. I will briefly take you through what it does and what it looks like.
The above is an excerpt from one chapter of my Undercover book. You will see in the right hand column different color codings. They denote items that the app finds you need to change. The relevant part of the text is highlighted in the same color.
Now you are informed, you can set about making the changes.
The screenshot above shows what happens when the mouse hovers over the word ‘very.’ It tells me to remove it. It’s a word that should not be used by writers. If something is important enough to describe as ‘very’ then use more words. Describe it and let the reader ‘see’ or ‘touch’ or ‘feel’ it. But drop ‘very’!
Above shows two examples of passive voice. I decided to keep these two in. Sometimes passive voice is appropriate. You can also see the scores in the right hand column have improved. There are zeros registered in the first three categories.
I found this interesting piece about passive voice and decided to share it:
The passive voice is a misunderstood entity in the world of writing. It is unfairly judged by many authors. Some writers, without taking the time to get to know this grammatical structure, avoid it at all costs. Others use it ineffectively because they do not understand how it works. How can you get to know this mysterious literary device?
First, let’s start with an explanation of what passive voice is. Passive voice sentences mention the thing or person receiving an action before mentioning the action itself, and may omit the actor altogether. For example, consider this sentence:
The leaves were blown by the wind.
The leaves receive the action of being blown. In the example, the agent is specified with the preposition by. However, the agent could have been left out of the sentence: The leaves were blown.
When is it proper to use passive voice? Consider these instances. Why do you suppose passive voice is appropriate? Check your answers below.
My camera was stolen from my locker at school.
A candle will be lit at the memorial service for the fallen soldier.
Diets are made to be broken.
The sodium hydroxide solution was heated to 200 degrees.
I will give you the answers later 🙂
You don’t have to do everything it tells you. I left in this adverb. I like the use of ‘haggardly’ in this context. You are my readers. I hope you like it too. That’s what really counts!
Pro Writing Aid is worthy of a further “tutorial” some time soon. It does extra things that Hemingway does not. It’s cool for finding sticky sentences and overused words. And, it’s far less expensive than a professional editor!
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Dan Brooks – Premium User
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The answers to the questions above:
- Who stole the camera? The agent is unknown. If you do not know who committed an action, it is appropriate to use passive voice.
- Who do you want to receive the attention? If you prefer the attention to be on the action itself (the candle being lit) and not the person doing the lighting, you may omit the agent.
- You are expressing a general truth that is applicable to many. Using active voice to express this idea would be awkward: People who make diets make them to be broken.
- Researchers often use passive voice in scientific reports. It is assumed that the reader knows that the experimenters are performing the actions without stating this fact explicitly. But, according to the University of Toronto, this trend is on the decline. Recent papers tend to contain more examples of active voice.
Those questions and answers were taken from the Grammarly blog. Grammarly Instant Spelling And Grammar Checker is another useful tool I use.
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